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Critiqued by =Flame-of-the-Phoenix
I do quite like the concept you used here. Yes, there are many such shots of words written on pieces of paper, but I think yours stands out.
What really caught my eye was your technique. I love the way the paper blurs on both sides, with the focus on the couple words in the middle. The background is beautiful and not only adds texture but color to the photo. I also really loved the use of bokeh on the bottom of the picture. There is a magical feel about the whole shot that really works.
I do have to agree with one of the previous critiques, though- it might have been slightly more effective with the fewest words you could use (they used the example of "trust life a little" instead of adding the "bit" at the end).
Other than that, great work!!
Andererseits könnte man natürlich sagen, dass die Fokussierung auf die Mitte des Schriftzuges es erschwert, da es nach außen hin echt stark verschwimmt.
Alles in Allem lässt sich sagen, dass ich das Foto richtig schön finde. Es ist zwar so ein klischeelastiges Zitat, aber ich finde es sehr gut umgesetzt.
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